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[Nameless Love]

Needs work.

First off: You need to animate at a higher framerate with more frames for the actions. The walking in the beginning could even be tweened to make it look like he's actually walking. You can use shape tweens to fade the colors of the backgrounds.
Second: You need to adjust the audio. It was much too low. You can change the audio levels in the library.
Third: Use a preloader, and a replay button. You can actually download preloaders here on newgrounds in the downloads section.

I hope this helps improve your future animation.

Pimienta responds:

Thanks TownFunk, Thanks For The Tip

[Kevin's Eighth April]

Cute

The story was good, and so was the animation. On thing I can pick out that wasn't so good was the lack of facial expressions. Even just animating the eyes would've made this a much better animation.

[By The Moonlight]

Good

It was good. Not amazing, but good. The illustration was nice, but the animation wasn't the best. The movements were a little stiff and mechanical. The music was good, but the lack of voice acting cost you a star.

Marsume responds:

Heh Yeah D: I made the music too!

And looking for some voice acting possibilities? ;P

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

Great animation

The animation in this doesn't even look like it was done in Flash to me! The quality of your work is amazing. The song was also very good. I've read the comics and I can say that this video represents them very well. ;)

[Narwhals]

Great

The music (as expected of Weebl) is great. There's only one beef I have with the animation. A Narwhal's horn is on its upper lip, not forehead. I noticed it was in the right place when punching the polar bear. But then that's just nit picking.

[CIGAR WARS]

Pretty nice

I like the intro and the idea was pretty cool. Not much story (any) and not a whole lot of actual animation.

That was one hair sith...

[-Love at First Sight-]

My god...

That was an amazing collab. I rarely see so much talent packed into one flash animation. You are all excellent artists and animators!

[Awesome Center Redux]

Faces

That was pretty awesome! I really like the over exaggerated facial expressions.

[Jesus vs. Godzilla]

Nice

That was some really badass FBF animation. Awesome idea too! The music was also great. The only thing I didn't like was the anime references...