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Needs work.

First off: You need to animate at a higher framerate with more frames for the actions. The walking in the beginning could even be tweened to make it look like he's actually walking. You can use shape tweens to fade the colors of the backgrounds.
Second: You need to adjust the audio. It was much too low. You can change the audio levels in the library.
Third: Use a preloader, and a replay button. You can actually download preloaders here on newgrounds in the downloads section.

I hope this helps improve your future animation.

Pimienta responds:

Thanks TownFunk, Thanks For The Tip

Good

It was good. Not amazing, but good. The illustration was nice, but the animation wasn't the best. The movements were a little stiff and mechanical. The music was good, but the lack of voice acting cost you a star.

Marsume responds:

Heh Yeah D: I made the music too!

And looking for some voice acting possibilities? ;P

*GASP!!!*

0_0 BANANA!!!

Bobert-Rob responds:

BANANA-BANANA-BANANA-BANANA! OOOOO! Er, I mean, thanks for the comment.

Awesome-ness in a can

That was one of the most amazing things I've ever seen! I love you.

Keramazotti responds:

I love you too :D

XD

LOLZ! It's great because it seems like a kids show but it's so.... Dark.
:D I loved IT!

Crumie responds:

:D Thank you

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